Thursday, April 30, 2015

Soldier-Moment in Time

WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.

I saw...a donkey being a doctor.
I heard...a shooting gun.
I felt...sad because people were dead.

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  2. to araira
    i hop you have a happy day
    from kaylee .

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  3. To Mrs Head
    It was a lazy donkey.
    From Araira.

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